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Nowadays, more and more young people want to lead independent lives, Many of them will leave home to study or work while still in their teens. What is one major advantage or disadvantage of this?

范文：

One Major Advantage of Being Independent

Considering how strongly prejudiced our society is against anyone who does not fit into the“independent”category, we can easily understand why independence is so important. As far as I am concerned, one of the most significant advantages I independent is that it facilitates motivation in both study and work.

Firstly, independent students are more likely to become self-motivating learners. Students from a large state university participated in a survey on the effect of independence on perceptions of obligation. Results indicated that independence was associated with intrinsic motivation, one major factor for success. If you are an independent learner, you will be motivated to learn, manage your own learner and reflect on your learning. Bering motivated will enable you to become a successful learner and provide you with insight into your learning achievements that will in tum enhance your motivation to continue learning.

Secondly, being independent at work boosts, motivation to great achievements, Taking self-employment as an important case of independence, it is shown that the self-employed derive more motivation from their work than people employed by an organization, irrespective of income gained or hours worked Independent people are more likely to focus on effective intrinsic reinforcers to make internal and controllable attributions for their success. They set goals and persist at tasks related to those goals.

To conclude, being independent enhances motivation, which is beneficial to both study and work. (232 words)

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1.Our independence and acceptance of responsibility allow us to have boundaries in place that help others know how to respond to us and know what is acceptable for us.

我们的独立性和责任感让我们有适当的界限，这样可以帮助别人知道怎样与我们相处以及对我们来说什么是可以接受的。

2.Independent people can function as self-reliant people. They are aware of what their special gifts are and who they are in relation to themselves.

独立的人可以依靠自己。他们清楚自己的特殊才能是什么，也清楚自己是谁。

3.Independence is not just being able to do things on your own, it is also thinking for yourself without harming others,taking care of yourself and the people around you, and becoming a true individual.

独立并不只是能够自己独立做事；独立的人还能在不伤害别人的前提下为自己着想，照顾自己和身边的人，成为真正的个人。